Masa and Joo (Assignment #3)
Dear Mr. Sam (Sprite) (WRITE EITHER Mr. Sprite/Sam,)
I am writing to confirm the arrangements for your meeting.
Your basic itinerary is (consists of) traveling (to) Japan and Meeting (with our contacts).
As discussed (with Paul), I will send your itinerary including attachments. Please check the following attachments:
* a suggested agenda for your trip (April 3 ~ April 17)
* a meeting with Terriaki Incorporated (April 19, 20)
* details of hotel arrangements (April 2 ~ April 21)
If you would like to make any changes to the itinerary, please let me know.
Best regards,
Paul Revere (? Write your name - Sam knows this isn't going to be from Paul)
Jonathon's Note: You've done an excellent job overall! I'm very pleased with your use of the target language. Just fix the minor little errors I've noted.)
I am writing to confirm the arrangements for your meeting.
Your basic itinerary is (consists of) traveling (to) Japan and Meeting (with our contacts).
As discussed (with Paul), I will send your itinerary including attachments. Please check the following attachments:
* a suggested agenda for your trip (April 3 ~ April 17)
* a meeting with Terriaki Incorporated (April 19, 20)
* details of hotel arrangements (April 2 ~ April 21)
If you would like to make any changes to the itinerary, please let me know.
Best regards,
Paul Revere (? Write your name - Sam knows this isn't going to be from Paul)
Jonathon's Note: You've done an excellent job overall! I'm very pleased with your use of the target language. Just fix the minor little errors I've noted.)
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