assignment 2 April &Ai
Dear Rosa Jackson,
My computer system crashed on Friday and the problem wasn't discovered until Monday.
Unfortunately, it seems that your information has been lost due to file corruption.
so could you please send me the attachments so which included some JPEGs and a PDF file to illustrate your problem.
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Dear Rosa Jackson,
My computer system crashed on Friday and the problem wasn't discovered until Monday (A good sentence, but put this after the next one - explain the problem first, then the cause). Unfortunately, it seems that your information has been lost due to file corruption. so (Don't use a conjunction at the beginning of the sentence) could (Could) you please send me the attachments so which included some JPEGs and a PDF file to illustrate your problem (end the sentence after "file").
Jonathon's Note: Pretty good! You got the main idea across very well. Just remember, try to be concise (the last sentence is an example of this).
My computer system crashed on Friday and the problem wasn't discovered until Monday.
Unfortunately, it seems that your information has been lost due to file corruption.
so could you please send me the attachments so which included some JPEGs and a PDF file to illustrate your problem.
________________
Dear Rosa Jackson,
My computer system crashed on Friday and the problem wasn't discovered until Monday (A good sentence, but put this after the next one - explain the problem first, then the cause). Unfortunately, it seems that your information has been lost due to file corruption. so (Don't use a conjunction at the beginning of the sentence) could (Could) you please send me the attachments so which included some JPEGs and a PDF file to illustrate your problem (end the sentence after "file").
Jonathon's Note: Pretty good! You got the main idea across very well. Just remember, try to be concise (the last sentence is an example of this).
posted by Business class @ 2:34 PM
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