Carolina and Cris assignment 2
Dear Rosa Jackson,
Thank you for your e-mail dated March8. Unfortunately, we had some problems in our system.
I would be grateful if you could send me the attatchment and your information again.
Thank you so much.
Carolina Cauduro and Cristiane
Jonathon's note: Good job! Your message is about as concise as it can be, yet you've gotten the main idea across. The only thing I might add is a sentence like "We are so sorry for the inconvenience." That's all.
Thank you for your e-mail dated March8. Unfortunately, we had some problems in our system.
I would be grateful if you could send me the attatchment and your information again.
Thank you so much.
Carolina Cauduro and Cristiane
Jonathon's note: Good job! Your message is about as concise as it can be, yet you've gotten the main idea across. The only thing I might add is a sentence like "We are so sorry for the inconvenience." That's all.
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