Business Correspondence Class

Thursday, April 06, 2006

Carolina and Cris assignment 2

Dear Rosa Jackson,


Thank you for your e-mail dated March8. Unfortunately, we had some problems in our system.

I would be grateful if you could send me the attatchment and your information again.


Thank you so much.


Carolina Cauduro and Cristiane

Jonathon's note: Good job! Your message is about as concise as it can be, yet you've gotten the main idea across. The only thing I might add is a sentence like "We are so sorry for the inconvenience." That's all.

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