Carolina and Sato

Dear Sally Albright


We know that you are gonig to Las Vegas in the conferece and we think you do not have some information, but we are send by email in attachment a sales report for the last business quarter, a spreadsheet of clients ,you should try to meet, a forecast of future sales and the new specifications for minimal requirements for use of your software.
And also we would like to know if you took the right broucher and the specific day you will return to the office.

Good luck in the conferece.


Sincerely, Carolina Cauduro and Sato Morikawa
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Dear Sally, Albright (She is your business partner, so you don't need her last name. Also, you need a comma after the name).


We know that you are gonig (going) to Las Vegas in the conferece (conference) and we think you do not have some information, but we are send by email in attachment (sending an email attachment that includes) a sales report for the last business quarter, a spreadsheet of clients you should try to meet, a forecast of future sales and the new specifications for minimal requirements for use of your (our) software.
And also we would like to know if you took the right broucher (brochure) and the specific day you will return to the office (this is an important question - it should be closer to the top of the email, not included after the bit about the brochure.

Good luck in the conferece (conference).

Sincerely, Carolina Cauduro and Sato Morikawa

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