Business Correspondence Class

Thursday, April 06, 2006

assignment 2 Isaac & Rocio

Dear Rosa Jackson,

After receiving your last e-mail, unfourtanely, my own computer was down, and I couldn't open the attached files. Would it be possible to send the JPEGs and the pdf files again?

Please, accept my apologies. I look forward to receiving your e-mail soon.

Thanks a lot.

-------------------------------------------------
Dear Rosa Jackson,

Thank you for your request. I am responsible for your trouble until it is properly solved.

I am awfully sorry to tell you that I could not open the attachments because my own computer was down on Friday. Would it be possible to send me the attached files again? I believe the files included some JPEGs and a PDF file. As soon as I receive your email again, I will deal with the problem in no time.

Best regards,

------------------------------------------------
Dear Rosa Jackson,

After receiving your last e-mail, unfourtanely (unfortunately), (I discovered) my own computer was down, and I couldn't open the attached files.

Would it be possible to send the JPEGs and the pdf files again? Please, accept my apologies. I look forward to receiving your e-mail soon.

Thanks a lot.

(Name)
-------------------------------------------------
Dear Rosa Jackson,

Thank you for your request. I am responsible for your trouble until it is properly solved. (Awkward - just explain the problem) I am awfully sorry to tell you that I could not open the attachments because my own computer was down on Friday.

Would it be possible to send me the attached files again? I believe the files included some JPEGs and a PDF file.

As soon as I receive your email again, I will deal with the problem in no time. Best regards,

(Name)
------------------------------------------------

Jonathon's Tips:

1. Well done! The message included all the important information and you've used the target language nicely. Just check the little errors.

0 Comments:

Post a Comment

<< Home